633 - The Greedy Shade

[TheNilvarg]

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[TheNilvarg]

This article is incredibly poorly written by someone with very broken English. Please edit it.

[Khuri]

Hi TheNilvarg,

thank you for your feedback!

We'd welcome it very much if you'd give some more constructive feedback on what it is exactly you don't like about the article, instead of just saying "poorly wrtitten, please fix".

Thank you!

[bitnykk]

Seems this player already commented so using /tell the very day this guide was released through Darknet/Neutnet : same vague comment with no detail of what to improve exactly ? Now subscribing here just to enforce it ... well ...

[Snakebite]

Having just reviewed it, it's fine...
Microsoft Word would probably describe it as 'wordy', but the grammar and structure are ok...

[bitnykk]

Made some rewording correction thanx to some suggestions that were made from John in Facebook's official AO page.

[Saavick]

I have improved the formatting of the tables a bit; prices are now centered under the items.

[bitnykk]

Added a missing NT nano sold ingame (verified today) : Nanobot Defense

[Saavick]

Nanobot Defense was there, but it's a trader nano

[bitnykk]

Aye, removed the mistake

[Poem]

Hello,

Seems the shade was moved in clan pande garden, how she's a bit left of the save point, behind it.

[Saavick]

Hi Poem, thanks for that! I went to check and found the Greedy Shade in the clan pande garden in the same spot as the screenshot shows him; that is, to the right of the saving point if you face the entrance, i.e. standing north of it and looking south. On the map, this would be left of the saving point. I think that's the cause of the confusion. I've changed it to "west of the saving spot" to clarify