287 - Bacchante's Anun Wings

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[WAusJackBauer]

Small grammar issue - "First one is that meat used for it,Anun Leg"

There should be a space after the full stop.

[Snakebite]

Small grammar issue - "First one is that meat used for it,Anun Leg"

There should be a space after the full stop.

Expanding on that..:

I suggest further changes. I haven't used the link formatting, but you get the idea!

Change:
This tradeskill took a while to figure out. After all, a meal that adds 50 fire damage for 30 seconds sounds like a sweet deal. But this wouldn't be AO, if there wouldn't be a catch or two. First one is that meat used for it,Anun Leg, has a rare drop chance from various Anun mobs scattered around Rubi-Ka. Second is that tool needed doesn't only have to be withing 80% of meat, but in this case name of it also matters. Tool is actually a weapon and needs to be named either : Quality E-Beamer, Balanced E-Beamer, Fine-Tuned E-Beamer, Deluxe E-Beamer, Premium E-Beamer or simply E-Beamer. Good news is that those weapons can be either bought from Weapon shop terminals, missioned for or even built using those Construction Manuals.
With all this complications, creating this spicy meal is straightforward enough.

To:
This tradeskill took a while to figure out. After all, a meal that adds 50 fire damage for 30 seconds sounds like a sweet deal. But this wouldn't be AO if there wasn't a catch or two. First one is that the meat used for it (Anun Leg), is a relatively rare drop from various Anun mobs scattered around Rubi-Ka. Second one is that the tool needed not only has to be within 80% of the leg, but in this case the name of it also matters. The tool is actually a weapon and needs to be named either : Quality E-Beamer, Balanced E-Beamer, Fine-Tuned E-Beamer, Deluxe E-Beamer, Premium E-Beamer or simply E-Beamer. Good news is that those weapons can be either bought from Weapon shop terminals, missioned for or even built using Construction Manuals.
But even with all these complications, creating this spicy meal is straightforward enough.

[Cariadast]

Spelling errors corrected
Reformated paragraphs for easier reading