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633 - The Greedy Shade

Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:13 pm
by TheNilvarg
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:13 pm
by TheNilvarg
This article is incredibly poorly written by someone with very broken English. Please edit it.

Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2018 8:14 am
by Khuri
Hi TheNilvarg,

thank you for your feedback!

We'd welcome it very much if you'd give some more constructive feedback on what it is exactly you don't like about the article, instead of just saying "poorly wrtitten, please fix".

Thank you!

Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2018 7:13 pm
by bitnykk
Seems this player already commented so using /tell the very day this guide was released through Darknet/Neutnet : same vague comment with no detail of what to improve exactly ? Now subscribing here just to enforce it ... well ... :roll:

Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 4:53 pm
by Snakebite
Having just reviewed it, it's fine...
Microsoft Word would probably describe it as 'wordy', but the grammar and structure are ok...

Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2019 7:15 pm
by bitnykk
Made some rewording correction thanx to some suggestions that were made from John in Facebook's official AO page.

Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2020 3:40 pm
by Saavick
I have improved the formatting of the tables a bit; prices are now centered under the items.