633 - The Greedy Shade

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633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by TheNilvarg » Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:13 pm

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Post by TheNilvarg » Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:13 pm

This article is incredibly poorly written by someone with very broken English. Please edit it.

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by Khuri » Thu Sep 27, 2018 8:14 am

Hi TheNilvarg,

thank you for your feedback!

We'd welcome it very much if you'd give some more constructive feedback on what it is exactly you don't like about the article, instead of just saying "poorly wrtitten, please fix".

Thank you!

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by bitnykk » Mon Oct 01, 2018 7:13 pm

Seems this player already commented so using /tell the very day this guide was released through Darknet/Neutnet : same vague comment with no detail of what to improve exactly ? Now subscribing here just to enforce it ... well ... :roll:

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by Snakebite » Fri Oct 05, 2018 4:53 pm

Having just reviewed it, it's fine...
Microsoft Word would probably describe it as 'wordy', but the grammar and structure are ok...
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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by bitnykk » Tue Mar 19, 2019 7:15 pm

Made some rewording correction thanx to some suggestions that were made from John in Facebook's official AO page.

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by Saavick » Fri Jan 03, 2020 3:40 pm

I have improved the formatting of the tables a bit; prices are now centered under the items.

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by bitnykk » Sat Feb 01, 2020 9:29 pm

Added a missing NT nano sold ingame (verified today) : Nanobot Defense

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by Saavick » Sat Feb 01, 2020 9:59 pm

Nanobot Defense was there, but it's a trader nano ;)

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by bitnykk » Sat Feb 08, 2020 9:32 pm

Aye, removed the mistake ;)

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by Poem » Fri Jul 03, 2020 4:38 pm

Hello,

Seems the shade was moved in clan pande garden, how she's a bit left of the save point, behind it.

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Re: 633 - The Greedy Shade

Post by Saavick » Tue Jul 07, 2020 4:20 pm

Hi Poem, thanks for that! I went to check and found the Greedy Shade in the clan pande garden in the same spot as the screenshot shows him; that is, to the right of the saving point if you face the entrance, i.e. standing north of it and looking south. On the map, this would be left of the saving point. I think that's the cause of the confusion. I've changed it to "west of the saving spot" to clarify :)

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