633 - The Greedy Shade

TheNilvarg · Post by **TheNilvarg** » Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:13 pm

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TheNilvarg · Post by **TheNilvarg** » Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:13 pm

This article is incredibly poorly written by someone with very broken English. Please edit it.

Post by **Khuri** » Thu Sep 27, 2018 8:14 am

Hi TheNilvarg,

thank you for your feedback!

We'd welcome it very much if you'd give some more constructive feedback on what it is exactly you don't like about the article, instead of just saying "poorly wrtitten, please fix".

Thank you!

Post by **bitnykk** » Mon Oct 01, 2018 7:13 pm

Seems this player already commented so using /tell the very day this guide was released through Darknet/Neutnet : same vague comment with no detail of what to improve exactly ? Now subscribing here just to enforce it ... well ...

Post by **Snakebite** » Fri Oct 05, 2018 4:53 pm

Having just reviewed it, it's fine...
Microsoft Word would probably describe it as 'wordy', but the grammar and structure are ok...

Post by **bitnykk** » Tue Mar 19, 2019 7:15 pm

Made some rewording correction thanx to some suggestions that were made from John in Facebook's official AO page.

Post by **Saavick** » Fri Jan 03, 2020 3:40 pm

I have improved the formatting of the tables a bit; prices are now centered under the items.

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